Seriously, why haven't I discovered you as a writer sooner? You should have seen me reading this story, it was kind of like:
HAHAHHAHHAHAHAAWHAT?NO!WAAWAAWAAAWAAAWAAAAWAAA!!!!!!!
Another one of your stories on the favourites list. Actually, you're really starting to intimidate me now, and I don't get intimidated easily. You're just that good. How do you get the dialogue just that real, the humour funny but not overdone and the tragic twists just that? Tragic. Incredible.
That's it. Consider yalself FICSTALKED.
SF