Take note of all of the positive reviews you get every chapter. Everyone enjoys your writing because it consists of such detail, yet its always interesting.
Ok well on with the review!!
I think Gerard was a little jealous of Frank's playing. Also, did Frank not tell Ocean that Gerard was a smug bastard?????? When I read that ocean was talking to Gerard, I was like "Frank should never talk to that fucking bitch again." (pardon my French). Damn, the emotional toll that last sentence took on me was kind of brutal, because I know how much Ocean means to Frank. Yea well I hate Ocean now. Sorry for rambling, but it's just how I feel right now.
Update soon (please) and yea great chapter!!!!!
-Jean Marie