Review for Build God, Then We'll Talk.

Build God, Then We'll Talk.

(#) FrankieXIero 2012-02-13

This isn't bad at all! I love it! Seriously can't wait for more!
Just an idea as to where this story could go (since you've been asking) I was thinking you could have Spencer and Ryan talking about how 'Holy shit, we're both real!' You know?
Then later Jon shows up and it's like BAM! He's real too!
Then after all three are caught up and discovered that yes, they all do really exist; Ryan meets Brendon before Spencer and Jon. Ryan tries to convince Brendon that Jon and Spencer and himself are real but Brendon doesn't believe him so Ryan makes a big social scene to prove that he is real and other people can actually see him too.
I don't know, kinda just spewed there and you could go in a totally different direction for this story if you wanted because, hey it's YOUR story and you can do wahtever the hell you want with it and I will still read it so cheers and good luck with writing! :)

Author's response

Thank you! I've been thinking about the plot-line you just gave me, and as lovely as it is that you actually thought about this I don't think I'll use it. In this fic, Ryan's character is really introverted, so I don't think he would do that, if you get what I mean? But thank you so much for your ideas, its so kind.

Thank you for carrying on reading it!