Review for Not all bunnys are innocent

Not all bunnys are innocent

(#) dancechickie222 2006-10-22

it sounds like an awsom story and i'm not trying to be harsh or anything, but it could be a little longer, and use a little more detail. I'd like to read the next chapter and see what happens and what Rainpaw said is an awsome idea, thats exactly what I do becuz i always make those lil' errors cuz of how fast I type. So update it soon.