Is the ghost Frank? I feel it's Frank. Now cause I've said this it wont be but whatevs I'm going looking for Frikey wherever I can find it!
Anyhoo now onto actualy reviewing something that might mean something to you....
I love your descriptions and the way you're not rushing the chapters they flow nicely and you get to know everyone at a natural pace. I also love how you include seemingly un important things that really make the story feel real.
I can't wait till your next update this story is so great!