I don't see why you dislike this story, it rocks harder than a stone!
This is so original and beautifully written. It wasn't until this chapter that I was thinking: hmmm, what could describe it? And then BOOM-a beautiful lie! Priceless.
Not to sound like a stony grouch or nuthin but maybe you should think about renaming the title. It's just that you give a slight impression that you don't care, which is a shame because this story really deserves a lot more credit than you give it!
Great chapter as usual. I like how most of it dscribes the confusion of Gerard's character without making it boring. Please please please update soon!