YOU KILLED RAY!!
How could you!? Sobs Dramatically
But seriously, this is so incredible!!
I love having the story in Mikey's point of view, it helps me understand the story more, ya know?
Oh God, I hate Mrs Toro so much.. cant she see that Mikey is suffering too!?
I get way too attached to characters in fanfictions... especially yours, you make them so real!
Excuse me while I go read the next chapter while crying my eyes out and eating my now soaked sandwhich....
Author's response
MWAHAHA! YES I DID!!
Thank you very much; I'm really pleased that you think this is alright!
I see what you mean about having it in Mikey's perspective, I'll try to have it in his more often.
Thank you sooooo much for taking the time to review! :)