(#) dw110 2012-02-18
Have you ever heard of punctuation? Possibly capitalization? Perhaps grammar?
About the writing itself, your prose is awful, your spelling is shoddy, your grammar is intensely disgusting and I wish this were printed on paper so I could turn it away and imply that it isn't good enough to be used as toilet paper. Seriously, this writing has less finesse of "Dick and Jane See Spot Run".
Author's response
hahahahaahahhaha i wrote all of that on my phone so i couldn't even care for you opinion shove it up your arse you knob all my love,no seriously i could not give two fuck xoxoxoox