Pretty, pretty please update soon?
This is FANTASTIC!
I am so excited to read more.
I love the concept honestly... it's interesting compared to most stories on here. I love original ideas. Definitely never read this before.
Please more soon?
I'm already hooked. That was a killer way to hook the audience at the end.
I know I'll be waiting for more...
Author's response
Thank you for the positive review!
I'm happy to know that my writing doesn't send everyone into Dreamland :'D