Andy Sixx - leader of the Fallen Angels? BWAHAHAHHAAHHAHAHAAHAHAHA!!!! XD
You have a sense of humour, my friend. This is a really interesting and original idea, I'm intrigued. But I think it would make your writing stronger if you described things a little less quickly and hurriedly, take some more time over it. Really creative though, looking forward to seeing how this progresses! :)
SF
Author's response
Thanks xD