(#) brad 2006-10-23
Merc said:
"Oooh come back from the future, now suddenly stronger than everyone else in the room."
Not quite, Merc - Harry is stronger than everyone else in the room ... COMBINED. Heh.
Yes, you've really got a super-powerful Harry in this one. One day you must consider writing a parody of these types of stories.
As you may recall I've always had a soft spot for a 'Harry in Azkaban' story ... or more precisely, a 'Harry against the world' story where only Hermione comes to his aid and believes in him. Okay, this tale doesn't seem to be it - Harry's so powerful there'd be no tension in his conflict against the magical authorities and Dumbledore - but I still see something in common with this:
"... we could set every adult you know, including Dumbledore, against us, along with Ron and Ginny, and maybe even Hermione"
I'll be curious to see what you do along those lines. In all of your stories I don't think you've had Harry on the outers with everyone; even Ron has usually come good after a while, and I think the other four have always been with him.
I'll have to wait and see what transpires!
Author's response
No, I've decided not to the Azkaban story, I write in enough cliched forms as it is! this story will be more detailed than 'Triwizard Redux', which is a more informal look.
"T"