Holy shit.... dies
(First review, YES!!!)
resurrects self so review will be written
Holy shit, this was soo good! I can't even.... What is this?? So incoherent right now. But that's okay. Who needs coherency when you read stories written by you?
Author's response
Thank you very much; I wasn't too sure about this one-shot, so it's really reassuring to know that you think it's alright.
Thanks! :D