Review for The Poison

The Poison

(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-02-26

Freaking intense!
Who is the lady?
Who painted the room?

Oh my goodness! I can't believe Gerard raped him! X.x
Be the cure- What an intense line!

I love how well written this was, btw. It was so emotional.

Author's response

Uhm... I'm pretty sure my character is a girl XD
That aside, thanks! I was looking to evoke an emotional response, if that wasn't already obvious. Glad I succeeded.