Review for Hold

Hold

(#) AlteredStateOfMind 2012-02-26

This was super sweet :')
I've read a lot of your stories and oneshots and they're all really well written and have great detail and thought behind them.
The thing I've noticed though, is that you tend to stick in your comfort zone which is usually Mikey being the helpless teenager in need of rescuing and someone else from MCR coming to his rescue.
It's always fantastic, don't get me wrong, but I think it'd be interesting to see something completely different from you, cause I know you'd do great and become a better writer for it.
You don't have to listen to me, it's not like I'm a pro or anything, I've only just gotton into writing myself.
But look at this as a challenge from me, if you're willing to try it.
Looking forward to more of your stories :)

Author's response

Thank you very much!
I do always portray Mikey as being the victim (with maybe "I Don't Want What I Can Have" being the exception), I don't why but it seems to just be how things play out whenever I start to write anything with Mikey in it (which is 99.99% of the time). I will definitely try to branch out more and I accept your challenge; I'll get to work immediately!
Thank you so soooo sooooooo much for taking the time to leave such an extremely helpful review! :)