This is really good! Just out of curiosity is the title by any chance linked to a song by Thriving Ivory? I know there's a slim chance but I saw it was a songfic and that the title was the same title of a song I knew and I had to ask XD But Yeah other than that it was really well written! :)
Author's response
Thanks!
No, it isn't I'm afraid. I'll check it out though!
Thank you for taking the time to review! :D