In your work there often seems to be an over-affinity for numbers and quantification - how much one person is more powerful than another, how much of a percent Hermione is attracted to Ron than Harry, that sort of thing - that is very distancing. It lacks emotion and humanity and involvement. Plot points tend to come off the same way, as a lists of things that happen rather than events that invovle the characters and the audience together. It's all so cold and impersonal.