(#) BenRG 2006-10-23
That was a good chapter! I enjoy the firm dark inevitability of Harry's point of view. This is the way things need to be done so this is the way they have to be done. I actually pity Snape if he has to deal with this without Dumbledore warning him off (or ignoring his warning, which would be even more justice at work).
Hermione's reactions are a bit off, although Luna's are more-or-less spot on. Hermione I would expect to be just a sliver more worried about the power that has just filled her best friend. I would expect her to be a bit more defensive and trying to protect him - this means she is going to be hitting the books hard tonight.
Overall, this is a very good story. I like the ambience and how you tell the story of the future.
BenRG's Rating: 7/10