Absolutely beautifully written. I mean, obviously all your stuff is but I actually think you've outdone yourself with this one. I almost weed a little at every simile "Like black water". WOW. And I liked the innocence that went into it...even though it's sex. If that makes any kind of sense.
Just...yeah. Well, the above reviews say it all. "Heartbreakingly beautiful".
SF
Author's response
Agh, thank you so freaking much! This review like, totally made my day :') I'm so glad you liked it...it's one of the few stories I've done that I feel reasonably satisfied with. And yeah, it does make sense- I was trying to make it kinda innocent, y'know?
Thank you so much again, it really means a lot :'D
CosmicZombie xo