ahhhh! I'm gonna beat Andy. with something incredibly hard. First for almost kissing Sheena (which should be yay) and then quite obviously being all bangbangbang with Foxy. Stupid boys. And Patrick with his grin of mockery. (although I did love your allusion to the Ugly Hat Store that we all know he shops at)
Its chapters like these that make me not able to decide if I want Sheena to get over Andy and fall for Patrick (the sweet, if slightly deluded boy) or keep waiting for Andy to clean his glasses and see whats right in front of him.
but anyway--great chapter. I do love this story so much. :) it gives me nice stuff to read before I have to head off and spend hours at work.
Author's response
Thank you rushmorely for this long review. :) I´ll give Andy a chance to explain his behavior in either the next chapter or the one after that. I hope your work hours pass at the speed of a hummingbird with a jet pack that wants to pass its work hours at the speed of a hummingbird with a jet pack that wants to pass its work hours at the speed of...