Review for We Killjoys are a FAMILY and we UNITE!!!

We Killjoys are a FAMILY and we UNITE!!!

(#) Mikeys_Glasses 2012-03-02

Yeah, I kinda agree with Panic up there. You really need to work on grammar and dialogue, but other than that, you have a good storyline going!

Keep writing, And I'm sure you'll get better and be AMAZING. :)