I like the fic, but now that Harry's at Hogwarts he seems to be exactly the same as he is in Canon. Can't you make him at least a little more adept at magic? A little more intelligent? He's exactly the same average student he is in canon, despite growing up around magic his entire life, travelling to different countries, and being sorted into Ravenclaw. Can't you at least make him a good student, or adept at magic? Other then that, though, I do enjoy the fic.
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Thank you for the review. To your point, he's only a first year. And as of the first week at Hogwarts he's had his wand just around a month. Never having used spells before it's not something he'd pick up quickly. Growing up in a magical family, he'll know the wizarding world, the animals, and I think Lily and the girls would've taught him at least History of Magic since that could be interesting if told uniquely. He'll be slightly better as time goes by compared to those in his year, but he's just starting out.