I like Gerard's POV, but having Frank's could be insightful.
-Just started reading-
Mwa ha ha, I saw this in the ...thingy? And was thinking "Hm... This looks like it has decent grammar." and I decided to read it. And shit. It's fucking amazing. There are some spelling mistakes (isn't there always?) but I really like it, it's most certainly very funny and just plain entertaining. I think... That if Gerard and Frank weren't best friends perhaps it would be rushing, but because they've flirted so much and known each other for so long it works.
~uninsightful review over~
Author's response
Whoa thts an amazing review thank you so much that made me feel really good XD