Why didn't this story get reviews? Is it a glitch? Its an excellent story and well told. Its well written with few if any grammatical errors. It really flows along. Perhaps because its on FicWad instead of fanfiction dot net? After I finish reading this I am going to check to see if you wrote any others.
Author's response
I'm not entirely sure why not. Does Ficwad seem to be phasing out of popularity? I posted here because of the ease of posting, and because I like many of the other stories on here.
I suppose one possibility is because I posted it all at once. Ficwad shows the latest stories on the first page, so mine didn't stay "new" chapter after chapter.