Review for Inconceivable. (Frerard)

Inconceivable. (Frerard)

(#) amos222 2012-03-10

Keep going please!! I don't think that this is overly cliche at all!! In fact, I think it's pretty original for a high school Frerard. The only iffy part for me is the bully's name, but that I can get used to in a few more chapters. Please update again soon, and I'll love you forever!!!