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Review for
Always On My Mind
Always On My Mind
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Mikeys_Glasses
2012-03-13
Naw- it doesn't suck! But on the contrary, your sentences were sort of short and choppy. :/
Not many other problems, and it was actually really good for your first time on here! :) a lot better than
some
crap on here... Lol.