the first time i tried to review this chapter i wrote: cool an update/promise of a re-write also Buffy yay
but apparently Ficwad finds that too short as they said: A review that short...? No. No, no, no. We demand intellectual rigor! And also $3,000 in small, unmarked bills. We suspect we're more likely to get the former. It's enough to make a collection of PHP scripts cry.
first what is a PHP script (it was in blue on the thing so hmm)
second insert snort chuckle thing
anyway maybe a little more is in order...
with the crossover in effect even if you kill off moldybutt too early you still have a whole host of possible directions to take your story.... other than pwp style smut
Author's response
Hi; thanks for your review. As to the Buffy cross, while it's a cross over with the BtVS Universe, the actual versions of the characters are from a fan-fic series that's in the Buffy Category, called the Fishbowl Series, and Xander, Cordelia and Faith are the main characters.
As for Moldy, he's not really that big a deal for most of the story, because Harry hurt him bad when he broke the connection. I'm doing something different with Dumbledore in this story, so I hope you like it. I'm currently working on Chapter 12, the first 11 chapters are out for beta now, and, once I get 15 or 16 chapters done, I'll start posting it.
Red