Wow. Such an emotional chapter! Very sad, but it's also very well written and I really like how everything unfolded. It didn't happen very quickly, but it wasn't dragging out either. The whole time I was like "Oh, Mikey! Frank and Gerard (and me) are going to be here for you!" Well, great job and I can't wait for more!
Author's response
thank you! I'm glad you
iked the pace of the story, as I wasn't to sure. the next chapter shouldn't be too far away.