Hey :)
Thanks for giving an honest opinion, although I disagree with the whole incest thing- I mean, they aren't related and haven't even been brought up as siblings, so I don't think it's incest at all.
Totally agree about The Twenty Ways- Scarlett_Fitch2027is awesome. I'll have to check Hero out :)
Any tips on how I could improve TTETI, then? It'd be much appreaciated :)
And just saying- please don't read my stories if you don't like them- I'd hate to force them on anyone!
C.Z xo
Author's response
I just read the latest chapter of TtEtI, and it was good. It didn't repeat, I think there might have just been a lull in the story the last few chapters.
And it is, legally incest. At least it is in America. (extensive Wikipedia research) I have step siblings, and it's considered immoral/illegal for me to dO anything with them. (okay, let me say EW. I would never do that to them.)
I don't really have any tips, I'm not a great writer. As I said, there might just have been a lull. It seems we're getting closer to Gerard, but I think Ocean's character is dying. I dunno. In the past few chapters, it seems Frank's though process has been the same. "I'm bullied, I hate Gerard and I can't tell anyone." it was the same thing over and over again, the point was over emphasized.
But the new chapter left me wanting to know more, and cruel as it sounds, I kind of wanted Danny to try and beat the socks off Gerard.
But I don think you really need tips. The general Ficwad population loves anything you do, so your stories are obviously well done. There are just a few oddities like me who don't like that particular cup of tea. Eh... I forgot what my point was. Oh, yeah. You're a big part of Ficwad culture, so you really don't need to worry much. People obviously love you.