Thank you, glad you liked it. Yeah, I know it's been a bit slow to get going, but I kinda just wanted to develop the characters, but I think I kinda failed at that. I'll re-write the whole thing at some point, so hopefully it'll be better then.
Hmmm, I didn't realise that about the incest. I don't think it'd be too weird- I mean, it's basically like two random teenagers coming to live with Frank. Hopefully it'll be okay.
Hahaa, I don't think you're the only reader that wanted Danny to beat Gerard :L
Thanks, that means a lot, and I totally understand that not everyone has the same taste in stories!
CosmicZombie xo