Hm... Can't wait for chapter 2. I think it's funny so far, keep up the good work. And I know I say 'hm...' like I'm contemplating, but no; hm is just my favorite word and it isn't relevant to the (excellent) story matter.
Author's response
Thanks, glad you like it! And thank you so much for reviewing again, it means a lot (:
CosmicZombie xo