Funny thing is I was just listening to A New Found Glory´s cover of "Dont´wanna miss a thing". Great work on this one. I love how Patrick stands up for his love (the sleazy whore). Hope you had a happy birthday filled with tons of ace ideas how to continue this story!
Author's response
i have a lot going on in this crazy mind of mine. after chapter 11 it's full of drama and suspense, and craziness, so brace yourself.