Really really really good. I loved how Pete just knew what Mikey was about to do. Giving a sense that he attempted before??? I don't know but it was just an excellent story and I loved everything about it.
Author's response
Thank you very much, I haven't written in a while so it's a real relief to know that you think it's alright! In my mind when I wrote this I kinda pictured Pete as having attempted it before, so it's cool that you thought that too. Thank you soooo much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :)