C'est moi. Reviewing. WhIch it seems I rarely do... Sorry about that!
To the review part- there were a couple splint mistakes, the usual shit and nothing too distracting. Oh... That may not be the bluntest way to say I thought it was good, but I though it was good ;)
I like the bracelet bit, and killing Ray... And Gerard resisting his gayness. We all know you swing that way, Gerard. (ominous voice) We all know...
Anyway, good job. I liked it; it did make me laugh at some point and another. Hm... I don't really have anything else to say that I can think of at the moment, so I'll end this review with the customary "Please update soon!", which I actually do mean sincerely. When I'm being fucking lazy, this story and BMD (when it was still ongoing, obviously) were some of the only ones I would read, ignoring the rest ;)