Wow. You're incredible at writing. I've never really known anyone who can tell a story with a short poem, and get as many details in it as you have. I adore the last stanza; it pretty much sums up true love in four lines. You're an amazing writer, hope you post more soon!
OXO
Author's response
Thank you very, very much! I'm extremely pleased that you think the story came across, despite this being a rather short poem.
Thanks for taking the time to leave such a lovely review and I shall try to have some more new stuff up as soon as possible. :)