I like what you did with the story. As soon as Monney and Padfoot are there with Harry it will get real interesting. Also what about the other girls what role do thet play in this story?
Author's response
Well, the story IS NC-17. . . . that will take a few chapters for Hermione, more for Luna, and more for Padma. I still have decided if I should add Susan and Tracey. . . .
"T"