This was amazing and super original! Gerard was WAY too overprotective of Mikey, blindly loving him to the point of causing him pain. Waycest always makes my day better, don't ask me why. Maybe you could do some kind of sequel where Pete comes back? Anyway, psyched that you're writing more again!
OXO
Author's response
Thank you very much! I was trying to do something relatively original, so I'm glad that you thought it was. Gerard was definitely too overprotective of Mikey, maybe even to the point of being a little scary.
I'll see what I can do about writing a second part in which Pete returns. I've kinda been thinking about it, so I'm pleased that you'd like a sequel thing.
Thanks for taking the time to review! :)