Ooh interesting start! I don't think you've begun with a poem before! I think it was a really great touch, I already pretty much get Gerard's character from it all.
I'm really excited about this one, the summary sounds great, as I guess it would be. It's YOU for Chrissake! Ahem. Anyways. Onwards to the next chapter!
SF
Author's response
Thank you! Glad you like the poem- it was kinda the aim to give a little insight into Gerard's character. Aww, thank you...I feel all stupidly smiley now!
CosmicZombie xo