WHOA.
Fantastic opening chapter. The writing was absolutely amazing, the way you manage to install suspense into every line was just awesome. In fact, I think this is your best chapter writing wise so far. I cannot WAIT to read on as weirdly it seems morbid suits you just as much as happy, laughable fluff!
Update soon.
SF
Author's response
Ahhh, your review actually made my day, THANK YOU! I'm so glad you thought it was good...It's not my usual kinda thing, but I actually really enjoyed writing it! Thanks so much for taking the time to review :D
CosmicZombie xo