(#) BenRG 2006-10-25
Ooh! Now things are hotting up. Harry is, of course, laying a trap here but I am interested to see how it is going to be sprung.
Ron is... well... Ron. However, I think you deserve credit for finding a compromise to solve the issue of his jealousy (and those shudder robes). Those robes make me strongly suspect that Molly is an Austin Powers fan-girl. ;-)
The interaction with Snape was well done too. I don't think that Snape has really felt fear like that since Voldemort's first fall.
BenRG's Rating: 7/10
Author's response
Harry needs to spin a story that will insure that Voldemort really wants Harry's blood, and won't attack Harry in the castle.
"T"