This is such a great story!!! It was really funny, especially the end. I love how Pete was so full of himself, yet he still lost the argument. I also liked how Gerard had clues about Pete and Mikey, but probably didn't even notice. Like how Mikey goes to the Fall Out Boy bus before every show and how they get a certain look on their face when someone brings up the other one's name. Pete's statement at the end totally confirmed Gerard's suspicions.
Mikey and Pete are super cute together. Anyway, this was no failure. It was a huge success! It really made me laugh! Great job!!!
Author's response
Thank you very much! I was aiming for funny with this, something that I normally suck at, so it's really good to know that you found it to be so. I tried to make it out like Gerard had all the evidence glaring him in the face about Mikey and Pete, but was just in complete denial about the whole thing.
Mikey and Pete are my current OTP, so I definitely agree that they're cute together!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review, I'm glad that it made you laugh! :D