Excelent chapter, I really like how you explained things. Also that Dumbledore is not evil, just trying to to good things with the wrong information, I suppose that can happen when you try to control everything.
I know Hermione will learn oculmency really soon, after all she have an organizated mind, lets see what else training can she do with Harry, besides its seem that their relationship is going well.
Hope to read next chapter soon.
Cheers
MAC