Oh lord, I'm so into this story that I have to resist the urge to google what Gerard did and then I have to convince myself it's not real. This story is brilliant, honesty, I feel like I'm actually inside of it, like inside Frank's head. Amazing piece of writing, keep up the good work!
Author's response
Wow, thank you so much- I'm so glad it seems real- I wasn't sure I was pulling that off okay. That's so nice to hear, thank you for taking the time to review- it means a lot :D