(#) Haze 2012-04-06
So I pretty much stalk everything you post on this website, and don't leave you reviews nearly often enough, so I'll leave you this one and try to improve in the future. (:
That conversation between Bernadette and Gerard was expertly handled. You gave us a lot of information, but the dialogue was still incredibly natural and believable. It's rare to find a writer who can fill a conversation with nothing but backstory and still make it sound like a conversation. I tip my hat to you.
Especially liked the insight into Gerard's character. Poor Mikey. I wonder if Frank knew him, or if Mikey was before his time?
I shall continue to stalk your writing, but I'll try to be more vocal about it. (:
- Haze