Sweetheart, this might be a masterpiece. Seriously. There is nothing worrying (that isn't meant to be worrying) as of yet, and the potential for greatness is huge. I don't know exactly where you're going to end up, but I do know that that's where I want to be. This is going to be awesome.
I liked how Frank's girlfriend is a total wuss, I like that Ray has a bit of an edge while still fitting in with Frank's normal crowd, and I adore Robbie. As long as he doesn't become an absolute asshat later in the story he could be one of the better OC's that I've seen. Is the band that Frank is going to see real?
Thank you so, so much for writing and posting this chapter. You are a complete pleasure to read every time. Happy Easter!!
Author's response
Oh my god, this review actually made my day- thank you so much! I am seriously excited about this story, so I'm glad people seem to be liking it :D And don't worry, I'm not planning on making Robbie and asshat :L No, I made the band and song titles up xD
THANK YOU so much for giving such a lovely review- I always look forward to your reviews :D
Happy Easter to you too!