I think this is very well written!!! I really liked that Frank at least tried to help Mikey, even if it didn't work out. I hope Mikey will allow himself to get help soon. Anyway, I feel kind of sorry for Gerard and Frank because they're only trying to help him, but he just refuses their help. I also feel sorry that Mikey has to go through so much. Well, amazing job and I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Author's response
Really?! Thank you. I didn't think it is that good. Frank is definitley trying all he can and certainly will even if Mikey refuses. I'm very glad that the point about it being hard for Gerard and Frank came through. That's what I think this chapter is about really. So I'm happy you got that message. I'm also happy that you still see how hard it is for Mikey also. That's a point I thought wasn't very well shown throughout the chapter. I hope to update soon now. Thank you for your really nice review!