When I checked my email and saw that you had posted numerous things today, I flipped. There's nothing more entertaining than reading excellent fanfic when you're home sick. This was definitely excellent, as is eerything that you write. I really liked how you had Mikey use "tummy" when he was talking to Gerard about cutting himself. It let a layer of innocence shine through the outer skin of depressed teenager. I always feel like crying whenever Mikey dies in a story. Loved this!
OXO
Author's response
Aw, thanks! I'm very pleased that my writing entertains you! I hope you get better soon.
I'm glad you picked up on the use of the word "tummy", it was my little attempt at showing the reader that Mikey really is just a child in this.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :D