Duuuuuuuuude! Get un-talented, seriously! Uhh...no idea if that made any sense :L
Anyway, I loved this to bits...beautifully macabre and sad and really though-provoking and insightful. The language was exquisite and the rhythm was perfect. One of my all-time favourite poems of yours. Just outstanding.
This was probably my favourite line;
A stunning caricature of death.
Wonderful. I'm gunna stop gushing now though- I hope you aren't getting sick of my reviews!
CosmicZombie xo
Author's response
Haha, thank you very much! :D
I'm extremely pleased that you liked it, I was worried that it was dull/dragged out. I normally fail with rhythm, so it's super nice that you thought it was alright!
Thank you so, sooooo, soooooooooooooooo very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely, kind review! :D