This wasn't bad at all! I thought it was really good! I'm glad Mikey at least responded to Gerard's news about their dad. It's progress, even if Mikey had been drinking. Great job!! Can't wait for more!
Author's response
Thank you. Mikey is making a little bit of progress by replying. It depends on his mood which makes everything so difficult. I'm very happy that you liked it and I hope to finish the next chapter now!