This was incredibly emotional and amazing :)
I agree with tortillachip, the part about the inside scars was very creative and meaningful :)
I also really liked the part about 'my last breath' and how you were saying how the person (that you are directing this poem too) wouldn't actually care.
Very beautiful, well done :)
Author's response
Thank you! :D
I'm super pleased that the inside scars thing got through alright.
Thanks for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :D