Wow.... just wow...
You have such a way with words, like, seriously...
Snake56Tongue has been reported missing after she stormed off in a fit of jealous rage over your writing skills...
But, yeah, anyway..
This is incredible, and you are just as talented at poems as you are at stories :)
I loved the description you used, and the last line totally completed the stunning-ness (is this a word?) of the poem :)
Well done!
Author's response
Aw, thank you very much!
Don't be jealous of my writing, it really isn't all that great. I just have way too much time on my hands.
Thank you very, very much for leaving such a kind review; it really does mean a lot to me! :D